• Andie

  

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  Re: A wintertime haiku

  Mon, February 25, 2008 - 3:10 PM

  when pee smell is gone
  the smell in air is better
  when it rains downtown

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• • Yair

    

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    Re: A wintertime haiku

    Mon, February 25, 2008 - 3:53 PM

    On and on the rain will fall
    Like pee from a star
    On and on the rain will say
    How downtown we are

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• Siou...

  

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  Re: A wintertime haiku

  Mon, February 25, 2008 - 4:10 PM

  When the rain is gone
  The streets are nice and shiny
  For only one day

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• • Paynie

    

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    Re: A wintertime haiku

    Sat, April 19, 2008 - 10:15 AM

    But when it rains,
    it really rains
    and then it goes away.

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